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留學(xué)文書的寫作技巧之選擇專業(yè)與理想
留學(xué)文書的寫作技巧之選擇專業(yè)與理想
選擇專業(yè)和選擇學(xué)校常常是相關(guān)的。主要是通過(guò)自己的經(jīng)歷或是背景講述個(gè)人如何熱愛(ài)某專業(yè)、學(xué)�；蚴悄撤N職業(yè)。
寫作要領(lǐng)：
1.從自身對(duì)專業(yè)興趣的起源、學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)歷出發(fā)，可以描述一下家庭環(huán)境的影響。
2.對(duì)學(xué)校的該專業(yè)的教育有所了解，強(qiáng)調(diào)自己認(rèn)同學(xué)校的教育理念、教育方法。
【精彩例文】
Tell us about your academic goals, circumstances that may have had an impact on your academic performance，and, in general, anything else you would like us to know in making an admission decision.
In China, we are never short of news, even explosive news. I am concerned about what is happening in my motherland because I hope I can see through China and change it into a better country. That is one of the reasons why I want to study economics. I choose economics as my major not because I want to earn money for myself, but because I want to do something for my country, to make people live a better life. There are many economic issues that closely related to ordinary people and the sky rocketing prices of housing in China is one of them.
It is impossible nowadays for young people in China, especially those from big cities like Beijing and Shanghai, to afford an apartment by themselves. In Beijing it is not even possible with the support of parents. The problem is partly caused by the large population and the transitional situation in China. The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming larger and larger. The government, having the intention of lowering people，s aspiration of buying houses, has not figured out how to control the housing market effectively.
In the past few years, I have been reading reports from different media inside and outside China in order to get a more reasonable understanding of the issue. It concerns every citizen in China and affects the stability of the whole society. While the developers are earning more and more money, ordinary people are bearing heavy
economic burdens. I have seen many young people feeling depressed and couples break up because of the problem.
Therefore, I want to bring a change to the current situation. I know it is a difficult problem and I cannot solve the problem with my own power. But I am willing to do my own bit to make young people live a free, easy life, and to make parents enjoy their peaceftil life.
【未來(lái)】
中國(guó)永遠(yuǎn)不缺少新聞，也不缺少爆炸性新聞。我很關(guān)心在中國(guó)的土地上發(fā)生的事情因?yàn)槲蚁Ｍ夷軌蚋私馑�，讓它變得更好。這是我為什么想要學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)濟(jì)的原因之一。我選擇經(jīng)濟(jì)作為我的專業(yè)并不是因?yàn)槲蚁胍獮樽约嘿嵏嗟呢?cái)富，而是希望能夠幫助人們過(guò)上更好的生活。很多經(jīng)濟(jì)問(wèn)題都和尋常百姓息息相關(guān)，而中國(guó)不斷攀升的房?jī)r(jià)就是其中之一。
現(xiàn)在中國(guó)的年輕人很難能夠依靠自己的能力買房子，特別是在像北京和上海這樣的大城市生活的年輕人就更加困難。在北京，如果沒(méi)有父母的資助的話，買房子幾乎是件不可能的事情。這個(gè)問(wèn)題一部分是由于中國(guó)過(guò)于龐大的人口和城市化進(jìn)程造成的。中國(guó)的貧富差距在不斷地?cái)U(kuò)大。政府想要降低人們購(gòu)買房子的意愿，然而卻沒(méi)能找出一個(gè)有效的方法來(lái)調(diào)控房地產(chǎn)市場(chǎng)。
在過(guò)去的幾年中，我一直在關(guān)注中國(guó)媒體和國(guó)外媒體對(duì)中國(guó)房地產(chǎn)市場(chǎng)的報(bào)道，以期對(duì)這個(gè)問(wèn)題有著更加理性的理解。這個(gè)問(wèn)題關(guān)系著中國(guó)的每個(gè)公民，并且影響著整個(gè)社會(huì)的穩(wěn)定。當(dāng)房地產(chǎn)開(kāi)發(fā)商積累起越來(lái)越多的財(cái)富，普通百姓卻承擔(dān)者越來(lái)越重的經(jīng)濟(jì)負(fù)擔(dān)。我曾經(jīng)見(jiàn)到過(guò)很多年輕人沮喪的神情，也曾目睹很多情侶因?yàn)榉孔拥膯?wèn)題而分道揚(yáng)鑣。
因此，我希望能夠改變中國(guó)房地產(chǎn)行業(yè)的現(xiàn)狀。我知道這是一個(gè)很復(fù)雜的問(wèn)題，我也沒(méi)辦法依靠自己的力量去解決它。但是我愿意做出自己的努力，幫助年輕人過(guò)上更加輕松自由的生活，讓他們的父母過(guò)上更加平靜的生活。
【佳文精評(píng)】
美國(guó)大學(xué)的申請(qǐng)文章中總是會(huì)問(wèn)到申請(qǐng)者將來(lái)的職業(yè)發(fā)展目標(biāo)以及申請(qǐng)者關(guān)注的領(lǐng)域。經(jīng)濟(jì)可以說(shuō)是每年申請(qǐng)者最熱門的選擇之一。這就給申請(qǐng)者提出了一個(gè)很嚴(yán)峻的挑戰(zhàn)：如何從眾多的申請(qǐng)者中脫穎而出，如何讓招生辦公室的老師真切地感受到你對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)的熱情而非只是隨波逐流，人云亦云。這篇范文便給出了一個(gè)答案：從小處著手，從你切實(shí)關(guān)心的經(jīng)濟(jì)問(wèn)題著手。作者通過(guò)對(duì)中國(guó)房?jī)r(jià)不斷攀高這一問(wèn)題的細(xì)致剖析與讀者產(chǎn)生了情感的共鳴，讓讀者感受到了作者對(duì)經(jīng)濟(jì)問(wèn)題的真切關(guān)注以及想要為中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展做出貢獻(xiàn)的意愿。這樣的申請(qǐng)文章讓人感覺(jué)言之有物，不會(huì)讓人感到空洞乏味。
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